Decent story for the most part although it has a few issues:

- Pacing Issues

Things at times seemed to either move a bit too slow for my taste while other times, things would move way too quickly. Little things would get covered a bit too much that doesn't really add to the story while other major events would just get grazed, which should be extended.

- Spelling/Grammar Errors

Found two errors

- Character development

It was okay for the most part although somethings could have been expanded on (family situations, outside of school life, etc.).

Decent story for the most part although it has a few issues: - Pacing Issues Things at times seemed to either move a bit too slow for my taste while other times, things would move way too quickly. Little things would get covered a bit too much that doesn't really add to the story while other major events would just get grazed, which should be extended. - Spelling/Grammar Errors Found two errors - Character development It was okay for the most part although somethings could have been expanded on (family situations, outside of school life, etc.).