Team Fortress 2

Team Fortress 2

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15 Comments
Jauntyweb 13 May, 2022 @ 6:12am 
Will do man, glad to see you're actually open to feedback like this, last time I did this to some other creator's item they just pulled the "it's old, get a grip" card. Then he deleted the comment lmao.:steamsalty: Will check out those other warpaints and give them some critique. :lunar2019piginablanket:
Vitro  [author] 13 May, 2022 @ 5:15am 
wow some actual good valid criticism on the workshop, that is rare. I gotta tell you though, this was probably one of my earlier warpaints. The one that fits the artstyle the most is probably the horsepower or birthday bakery, I'd recommend looking at those two and maybe give me some feedback on them too :)
Jauntyweb 12 May, 2022 @ 8:43pm 
As much as I like the Vaporwave a e s t h e t i c , it simply does not belong within TF2.

First of all, the colours. The pink especially does not fit the game's style, since TF2 is mostly comprised of earthy tones, with what colour it has is muted, the whole neon Pink and Cyan colours weren't really a thing in the 60's nor are they seen anywhere in the game (outside of the few warpaints that valve accepted for some reason) You also used Jet black for the trees, which again, isn't anywhere in-game, the darkest in the game is closer to a charcoal grey.
Jauntyweb 12 May, 2022 @ 8:43pm 
The secondary texture is just a solid colour, with no texture. And it feels too saturated too.

The main texture is, quite honestly, pretty bad. The "Palm Tree" shape is literally the same copy pasted across the whole texture, no rotation, no different shapes to trees, just the same image with different sizes, and I wouldn't be surprised it was a google image you found. The colour gradient is just a stock photoshop gradient with almost no adjustments to it. The stripes overlay does add that "old TV" look to it but it doesn't help it's case. The texture itself also isn't seamless, and I can tell that you aren't aware of the "pattern preview" tool in Photoshop. If you DO use photoshop, do look into it, it will help you massively when making seamless textures.
Jauntyweb 12 May, 2022 @ 8:43pm 
TL;DR, this warpaint isn't good. Colours are too saturated, nor do they fit the game, the main texture is lazy and isn't seamless, and the secondary texture is just a flat colour. If you do make future warpaints and truly care about maintaining TF2's artstyle, avoid vaporwave themed ones altogether. But if you DO wan't to make a vaporwave themed warpaint, put some more thought and effort into making it.

I apologise in advance if I come off as harsh, but I have very strong opinions on preserving the artstyle of one of my favourite games.
Nick129 7 Jan, 2022 @ 2:41pm 
galaxy colors are my fav :ok_ay: :balloonicorn:
Retro_synthwave 24 Jul, 2018 @ 5:21am 
Cool
aurieh 23 Apr, 2018 @ 12:43pm 
good shit my dude
json 12 Mar, 2018 @ 8:38am 
That's a damn nice war paint.
seel 20 Feb, 2018 @ 11:04am 
ooh thats nice ぴウず
seel 20 Feb, 2018 @ 11:03am 
W A V Y A S H E L L
JanNiclas666 30 Dec, 2017 @ 11:39am 
:naturalupohlebalu: P L E A S E I N E E D T H I S :moonbly:
Fryster 26 Dec, 2017 @ 7:06am 
H O T L I N E M I A M I
Dr. Pyro 26 Dec, 2017 @ 1:29am 
It looks like a missing texture
kane 25 Dec, 2017 @ 10:34am 
looks good