The art is very clearly done with AI (probably the text too) and I don't see this clarified anywhere.

has a a lot of future potential but too much reading and scrolling (constantly dying and having to restart). Doesn't seem like a lot of content as well. It's priced low so maybe someone else would enjoy it. I have some suggestions to improve it:
-reduce text. too much reading.
-there should be pages instead of one giant scrollable area. also scrolling so not fun if you're trying to redo choices (maybe add a button to scroll to bottom)
some other minor issues/comments:
-It's strange to refer to main character as in 3rd person (He, Vesper etc), normally the player is the main character
-some english translations are a bit off. I would ask a native speaker to help correct them
Text based choice games are actually very fun but rare and I think if you keep working on this (or your next game project) you could achieve a lot of success. For some ideas, you can check this mobile game: Eldrum

good interesting story with a lot of choice
atmospheric music
not easy not to die every 2 minutes)