great grafic like natural

you had me at bonus ducks

i'd say you have great potential in terms of animating. Although you don't have a very good chance compared to some of the better animations, you are definitely above average.

What i enjoyed the most was the story itself, more than anything else in the video, and that's where you shine the most. Although i don't consider this video to be the best in terms of animation, it was clear, that it won my heart through humor.

m8, the road you have chosen as an animator is challenging, but i feel, that you can become something great in the future. I sincerely hope, that you will keep animating, for I believe you got what it takes :)

Nice job!

You've got some great animating skills - but you may want to think about the lip and camera movements in the future because they're rather odd.
It's also best if you don't use the TF2 music. It just feels more generic that way, and it overlapped at one point in this video.
Otherwise though, I think it's good enough to get my vote.

box trot op pls nerf valve. XD

What Nic said.

i was not expecting that ending but i loved it