Recent reviews by VicVuci

In realms of gaming's vast expanse
I chanced upon a 'Juggler's Tale,'
A game of such meagre, dance,
Whose charm, alas, dose quickly pale.

For TWENTY COINS AND NINETY-NINE,
One might expect a grander quest,
Yet found I naught by thin design,
In this creation, plainly dressed.

The poetry, so bland and bare,
Lacks wit, lacks spark, lacks soulful flare.
A narrative, thin as air,
Leaves much to be desired there.

Aesthetics quaint, at first delight,
Yet soon their novelty takes flight,
A student's work, perhaps, might cite
Such simple forms in kinder. light.

But lo, for price, 'tis much to steep,
For art so shallow, charm so cheap,
In this game, ennui does creep,
And leaves one yearning for the deep.

So here I pen, with heavy heart,
This tale of jugglery falls short,
A piece that could, with more fine art,
Have soared beyond its humble start.