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NIOWL 13 Jun, 2024 @ 11:25am 
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it was a brave decision to cut yor :fire:MANHOOD:fire:
Since its Kurban bayramı and you couldnt find a sacrifice to offer our God, Red GOD.
it was smart to cut your manhood.
I mean ur a math guy (not meth:papyrus:) so it makse sanse.
labik 10 Aug, 2023 @ 10:42am 
+rep
tikitoki
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:07am 
REVENGE OF THE SITH
(THE NON-CANON DRAFT)
EXT. SPACE
A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away.
A vast sea of stars serves as the backdrop for the Main
Title, followed by a rollup, which crawls into infinity.
War! The Republic is crumbling under attacks by the
ruthless Sith Lord, Count Dooku. There are heroes on
both sides. Evil is everywhere.
In a stunning move, the fiendish droid leader, General
Grievous, has swept into the Republic capital and
kidnapped Chancellor Palpatine, leader of the Galactic
Senate.
As the Separatist Droid Army attempts to flee the
besieged capital with their valuable hostage, two Jedi
Knights lead a desperate mission to rescue the captive
Chancellor....
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:06am 
PAN DOWN to reveal a REPUBLIC ATTACK CRUISER. Continue
to PAN with the Cruiser as TWO JEDI STARFIGHTERS enter
and head toward an enemy Battle Cruiser.
TRUCK with the Jedi Fighters as they maneuver in unison,
dodging flack and enemy laser fire.
R2-D2 is on ANAKIN'S ship. R4-P17 is on OBI-WAN'S ship.
A giant space battle is revealed as the tiny Jedi ships
continue their assault in a synchronous ballet.
INT. OBI-WAN'S STARFIGHTER COCKPIT - SPACE
OBI-WAN bounces through the flack with a frown. His ship
rocks violently.
INT. ANAKIN’S STARFIGHTER COCKPIT - SPACE
ANAKIN smiles as he blasts a TRADE FEDERATION DROID DROP
FIGHTER.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:06am 
ANAKIN
There isn't a droid made that can out fly
you, Master, and no other way to get to
the Chancellor...
OBI-WAN
Look out, four droids inbound...
EXT. CORUSCANT - SPACE BATTLE
The TWO JEDI FIGHTERS swerve in unison as FOUR TRADE
FEDERATION DROID DROP FIGHTERS attack.
After several clever moves by the Jedi, two of the
FEDERATION DROID DROP FIGHTERS collide with each other in
a ball of flame.
INT. OBI-WAN'S STARFIGHTER COCKPIT - SPACE
Obi-Wan struggles to maintain control of his ship.
OBI-WAN
We've got to split them up.
ANAKIN
Break left, fly through the guns on that
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:06am 
Obi-Wan flies to the left of a huge tower on a REPUBLIC
CRUISER. The TWO DROID DROP FIGHTERS follow.
OBI-WAN
Easy for you to say. Why am I always the
bait?
ANAKIN
Don't worry. I'm coming around behind
you.
Obi-Wan deftly maneuvers around a large Starship's
superstructure, but the TWO DROID FIGHTERS stay on his
tail, BLASTING him with intense laser fire.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Anakin, they're all over me!
ANAKIN
Dead ahead! Closing... lock onto him,
Artoo.
Artoo BEEPS his reply as Anakin swoops in for the kill.
He BLASTS one of the DROID DROP FIGHTERS. It EXPLODES.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:06am 
ANAKIN
(laughs)
We got him, Artoo!
Anakin BLASTS away at the second DROID DROP FIGHTER as
Artoo BEEPS an angry warning.
ANAKIN
I copy, Artoo.
OBI-WAN
I'm going down on the deck.
ANAKIN
Good idea... I need some room to
maneuver, though.
Obi-Wan dives toward the surface of one of the larger
TRADE FEDERATION BATTLESHIPS and is forced to fly through
a maelstrom of laser flack. He skims the surface,
followed by the DROID DROP FIGHTER, which is followed by
Anakin.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:06am 
ANAKIN
Cut right. Do you hear me? Cut right.
Don't let him get a handle on you. Come
on, Artoo, lock on! Lock on!
Artoo BEEPS. The crosshairs merge on the DROID DROP
FIGHTER.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Hurry up! I don't like this!
Obi-Wan flies through a narrow gap between two towers on
a Battleship.
The DROID DROP FIGHTER hits one of Obi-Wan's wings with a
laser blast, parts of the ship go flying around Obi-Wan's
Astro Droid, R-4.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Ouch!
R-4 BEEPS a blue streak.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Don't even try to fix it, Arfour. I've
shut it down.
ANAKIN
We're locked on... we've got him.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:05am 
Anakin drops in behind the DROID DROP FIGHTER and blows
him apart. Artoo SQUEALS with delight.
ANAKIN
Yeah! We got him... good going, Artoo.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:05am 
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Next time you're the bait... Now let's
find the Command Ship and get on with it.
R-4 BEEPS a blue streak.
ANAKIN
Lock onto them, Artoo. Master, General
Grievous's ship is directly ahead.
Artoo BEEPS a reply, and it reads out in Anakin's
cockpit.
ANAKIN
The one crawling with vulture droids.
INT. OBI-WAN'S STARFIGHTER COCKPIT
OBI-WAN KENOBI
I see it. Oh, this is going to be easy.
Ahead is a TRADE FEDERATION CRUISER with bat-like DROID
VULTURE FIGHTERS stalking around on the hull.
The VULTURE FIGHTERS transform into flight configuration,
lift off the CRUISER, and attack the JEDI STARFIGHTERS.
ANAKIN
Come on, Master.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Not this time. There's too much at
stake. We need help. Odd Ball, do you
copy?
ODD BALL (OS)
Copy, Red Leader.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Mark my position and form your squad up
behind me...
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:05am 
ANAKIN
This is where the fun begins. Ten
Vulture Droids straight ahead, coming
down the left side.
Artoo BEEPS a worried message.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Add five Tri-fighters on the right...
ANAKIN
I'm going head to head. See you.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Take it easy, Anakin.
Four Clone Fighters move into formation behind the Jedi.
ODD BALL
I'm on your right, Red Leader.
ANAKIN
Incoming!!
Artoo SQUEALS as five DROID TRI-FIGHTERS pass by at high
speed on the right.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Five more on the right!
Four more VULTURE DROID FIGHTERS pass at high speed from
the left. All hell breaks loose.
Obi-Wan and Anakin continue to fly in unison, backing up
each other. Artoo SQUEALS as usual.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:05am 
ANAKIN
Here we go.
The Jedi ships split up and make a quick loop around the
DROID TRI-FIGHTERS, ending up behind them. BLASTING
away. The DROID TRI-FIGHTERS EXPLODE.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
I'm going high and right.
ANAKIN
Hang on. There are four more of them.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:05am 
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Stay with me... swing back and right...
help me engage. Now back off... Let them
pass between us.
ANAKIN
I'm coming around on your tail.
OBI-WAN
All right, engage... and hurry. These
droids are over me.
In one incredible move, ANAKIN swings in behind the DROID
TRI-FIGHTERS, blowing them away one by one until there is
only one left. ARTOO CHIRPS.
Artoo lets out a HOWL as ANAKIN accelerates past the last
DROID TRI-FIGHTER, slams on his brakes, flips the Fighter
around, and BLASTS the Fighter from the front.
Artoo BEEPS frantically as they fly through the debris of
the destroyed ships. Anakin looks behind him.
ANAKIN
How many back there. Artoo?
(Artoo beeps)
Three... Four... that's not good.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Anakin, you have four on your tail.
ANAKIN
I know, I know.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Four more closing from your left.
ANAKIN
I know, I know!
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:04am 
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Break right and go high.
ANAKIN
I'm going low and left.
Obi-Wan shakes his head.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
(to himself)
He still has much to learn.
Anakin swoops low and skims across a TRADE FEDERATION
BATTLESHIP, dodging flack as Artoo bounces along, trying
to get out a sentence.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:04am 
ANAKIN
Hang on, Artoo. Obi-Wan, do you copy?
I'm going to pull them through the
needle.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Too dangerous. First Jedi rule:
"Survive."
ANAKIN
Sorry, no choice. Come down here and
thin them out a little.
Obi-Wan drops in behind the DROID VULTURE FIGHTERS
chasing Anakin. Arfour BEEPS to his Master.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Just keep me steady... hold on... not
yet... now break left.
Obi-Wan fires as he swings across the back of the VULTURE
DROIDS, BLASTING four of them away.
Anakin heads for a trench along the surface of one of the
Trade Federation Battleships. He flies into the trench,
which ends in a conning tower with a small slit between
two main struts.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
You'll never get through there, Anakin.
It's too tight.
Artoo BEEPS nervously.
ANAKIN
Easy, Artoo... we've done this before.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:04am 
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Use the Force, think yourself through,
the ship will follow.
Artoo SQUEALS in a panic. On the view screen Artoo's
squeal reads out, "WE'RE NOT GOING TO MAKE IT."
ANAKIN
Wrong thought, Artoo.
Anakin slips through the narrow gap. The trailing
Vulture Droid Fighters CRASH!
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:04am 
ANAKIN
I'm through.
Obi-Wan continues firing on the VULTURE DROID FIGHTERS,
driving them into the EXPLOSION.
A CLONE fighter is hit and explodes, spewing debris. The
CLONE PILOT spins off into space.
Finally, Obi-Wan peels off and swings around, pulling up
alongside Anakin.
CLONE FIGHT SQUAD SEVEN battles the Droids.
ODD BALL
There are too many of them.
CLONE PILOT 2
I'm on your wing. Break left. Break
left. They're all over me. Get them off
my...
The Clone’s ship EXPLODES.
ANAKIN
I'm going to go help them out!
OBI-WAN KENOBI
No, no! They are doing their job so we
can do ours. Head for the Command Ship!
Another CLONE fighter is hit, bursts into flames, and
spins off into space.
A VULTURE DROID FIGHTER raises its head to locate its
target and fires missiles at them.
ANAKIN
Missiles! Pull up!
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:04am 
Anakin and Obi-Wan break right and left, and the missiles
follow them. Anakin does a barrel roll spin, causing the
missiles following him to collide and EXPLODE.
Two missiles continue to chase Obi-Wan. He banks sharply
to the right, then to the left, causing one of the
missiles to overshoot.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:04am 
OBI-WAN KENOBI
They overshot us...
The second missile streaks next to Obi-Wan’s Fighter and
EXPLODES.
Obi-Wan's ship rocks, and Arfour, SCREAMS as the
Starfighter rips through the explosion. Debris flies all
around them.
ANAKIN
They're coming around!
OBI-WAN KENOBI
All right, Arfour. No, no. Nothing too
fancy.
ANAKIN
Surge all power units, Artoo! Stand by
the reverse thrusters.
Anakin spins his starfighter. The missiles spin and
collide.
ANAKIN
We got 'em, Artoo!
Two missiles continue to track Obi-Wan.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Flying is for droids.
Suddenly, OBI-WAN shudders, and his ship starts to
plummet toward the surface of the Trade Federation
Cruiser.
The trailing missiles fly into what looks like debris,
and detonate. Five silver balls fly out of the debris
and attach themselves to the ship. The balls pop open,
revealing SMALL BUZZ DROIDS that begin to crawl across
the surface like spiders.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
I'm hit! Anakin?
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:04am 
ANAKIN
I see them... Buzz Droids.
The BUZZ DROIDS crawl across Obi-Wan's ship and start to
tear it apart.
SPARKS ERUPT where the BUZZ DROIDS break into the wiring.
One of the BUZZ DROIDS goes after Arfour.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:04am 
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Arfour, be careful. You have one...
Aefour's head gets ripped off and flies away.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Oh, dear. They're shutting down all the
controls.
ANAKIN
Move to the right so I can get a clear
shot.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
The mission. Get to the Command Ship.
Get the Chancellor! I'm running out of
tricks here.
Anakin moves into position just off Obi-Wan's left side
and angles his ship so his guns are pointing at the
DROIDS crawling over Obi-Wan’s Starfighter.
Anakin fires and vaporizes the TWO BUZZ DROIDS, along
with the left wing of Obi-Wan's ship.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
In the name of...
ANAKIN
Steady, steady...
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Anakin, hold your fire, hold your fire.
You're not helping here.
ANAKIN
I agree, bad idea. Swing right, ease
over... steady...
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Wait, wait, I can't see a thing! My
cockpit's fogging. They're all over me,
Anakin.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:03am 
ANAKIN
Move to the right.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Hold on, Anakin. You're going to get us
both killed! Get out of here. There's
nothing more you can do.
ANAKIN
I'm not leaving without you, Obi-Wan.
Anakin moves his ship next to Obi-Wan's and tries to
physically knock the BUZZ DROIDS off. Five are left. He
manages to get one off, but badly dents Obi-Wan's ship in
the process.
One of the BUZZ DROIDS tears apiece off of the front of
Obi-Wan's ship. Flames burst, more smoke billows out,
obscuring the Jedi's view.
Anakin knocks off three of the BUZZ DROIDS and the fourth
crawls out onto Anakin's ship and starts attacking Artoo.
fights the BUZZ DROID.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:03am 
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Blast it... I can't see... my controls
are gone.
ANAKIN
Get 'em, Artoo. Watch out!
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Artoo, hit the buzz droid's center eye.
Artoo extends an arm and aims a stream of electricity at
the swerving BUZZ DROID. The BUZZ DROID is hit squarely
in the eye and falls off the ship.
ANAKIN
Yeah, you got him!
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Great, Artoo.
ANAKIN
Stay on my wing, the General's Command
Ship is dead ahead. Easy, pull up...
Head for the hangar.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Have you noticed the shields are still
up?
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:03am 
ANAKIN
Oh! Sorry, Master.
Anakin streaks ahead of Obi-Wan's disintegrating Jedi
Fighter and blasts the shield generator. It SPARKS and
EXPLODES.
OBI-WAN
Oh, I have a bad feeling about this.
INT. MAIN HANGAR-TRADE FEDERATION CRUISER
The shield door drops away, and Obi-Wan crashes on the
deck of the hangar bay, engulfed in a FANTAIL OF SPARKS.
A set of blast doors starts SLAMMING shut across the
hangar opening, as material is sucked into space.
Anakin, as only he can, maneuvers around the oncoming
junk and flies into the hangar just as the blast doors
SLAM shut.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:03am 
Obi-Wan ignites his light saber and cuts his way out of
the cockpit. He jumps dear just as his ship EXPLODES.
BATTLE DROIDS rush at him from all directions.
Anakin jumps out of his ship and cuts his way through the
BATTLE DROIDS to where Obi-Wan is fighting.
Artoo pops out of the ship and follows Anakin.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Artoo, locate the Chancellor.
ANAKIN
Tap into the ship's computers.
They cut down the last of the droids and follow Artoo
over to a computer wall socket. The two JEDI fight off
FOUR MORE DROIDS as Artoo tries to find the Chancellor.
Finally, a HOLOGRAM of the Trade Federation ship appears.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
The Chancellor's signal is coming from
right there. The observation platform at
the top of that spire.
ANAKIN
I sense Count Dooku’s presence.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
I sense a trap.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:02am 
ANAKIN
Next move?
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Spring the trap.
The JEDI start to leave, Artoo follows.
ANAKIN
Artoo, go back. I need you to stay with
the ship.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Here, take this, and wait for orders.
Obi-Wan tosses the comlink to Artoo.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:02am 
INT. BRIDGE - TRADE FEDERATION CRUISER
GENERAL GRIEVOUS enters the bridge of the cruiser
followed by his TWO BODYGUARDS. He walks to the front of
the bridge and stands in front of the NEIMOIDIAN CAPTAIN.
GENERAL GRIEVOUS
What's the situation, Captain?
CAPTAIN
Two Jedi have landed in the main hangar
bay.
GENERAL GRIEVOUS
Just as Count Dooku predicted. See to it
they find their way to him.
INT. HANGAR - TRADE FEDERATION CRUISER
Anakin and Obi-Wan head for the elevator. A door opens
in the hallway and two of GENERAL GRIEVOUS's BODYGUARDS
confront the JEDI.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Anakin...
ANAKIN
Ready.
They use their lightsabers to cut a large circle in the
floor.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:02am 
INT. GENERATOR ROOM - TRADE FEDERATION CRUISER
The TWO JEDI cut their way down several floors into a
large generator room.
Huge EXPLOSIONS outside the ship have caused several
large pipes overhead to break, and fluid is spewing
everywhere.
The Jedi get up and turn off their light sabers.
Kenobi dips his hand into the fluid and sniffs it.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:02am 
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Fuel. The slightest charge from our
sabers will send this ship into oblivion.
That's why they've stopped shooting.
ANAKIN
Well then, we're safe for the time being.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Your idea of safe is not the same as
mine.
They run, EXPLOSIONS rattle the ship, and pipes continue
to burst around them, spilling more fuel into the
hallway.
At the far end, SIX SUPER BATTLE DROIDS drop into the
fuel. The SOUNDS OF SHIELD DOORS CLOSING AND LOCKING
ECHO throughout the hallway.
They pass several large power generators, which are
topped with SPARKING excess power dischargers.
ANAKIN
They're sealing this section off.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Six droids coming our way!
The last of the DOORS CAN BE HEARD CLOSING in the
distance.
The TWO JEDI pull themselves through the narrow vent
shaft until they reach a small hatch in the side of the
tube.
ANAKIN
Here's a way out.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:02am 
As the SUPER BATTLE DROIDS reach the opening in the
ceiling and the fuel gets to within a few feet of the
power generator sparks.
The JEDI work the keyboard on the pressure lock, opening
the latch.
INT. SMALL PASSAGEWAY - TRADE FEDERATION CRUISER
The TWO JEDI climb into a small passageway and slam the
hatch shut. They make their way through the evershrinking shaft until they reach the end.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:01am 
INT. WIDE HALLWAY - TRADE FEDERATION CRUISER
The two JEDI wait for an elevator to arrive. They turn
around and see they’re face to face with THREE DESTROYER
DROIDS.
The DROIDS start blasting away. Anakin deflects the
bolts. Obi-Wan frantically pushes the elevator button
several more times.
ANAKIN
Destroyers!
Finally the door opens, and they rush inside under a hail
of laser bolts. The elevator door slides shut.
The JEDI turn to see BATTLE DROIDS standing behind them.
BATTLE DROID
Drop your weapons!
The JEDI activate their light sabers and destroy all the
BATTLE DROIDS.
INT HANGAR - TRADE FEDERATION CRUISER
R2-D2 notices two SUPER BATTLE DROIDS entering the
hangar. He moves and hides behind Anakin’s Starfighter.
INT. ELEVATOR - TRADE FEDERATION CRUISER
The elevator begins to move and screeches to a stop.
ANAKIN
Well, there's more than one way out of
here.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:01am 
Anakin ignites his lightsaber.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
We don't want to get out, we want to get
moving. Artoo, Artoo. Do you copy?
Activate elevator...
(looks at control panel)
31174.
The elevator begins moving.
INT. GENERAL'S QUARTER'S - TRADE FEDERATION CRUISER
The elevator door opens and the TWO JEDI carefully make
their way into the main room of the General's Quarters.
At the far end sits SUPREME CHANCELLOR PALPATINE.
Anakin and Obi-Wan move towards the Chancellor. As they
get closer, they see a very distressed look on the
Chancellor's face.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:01am 
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Chancellor.
ANAKIN
Are you all right?
PALPATINE
(quietly)
Count Dooku.
Palpatine makes a small gesture with his hand.
Obi-Wan and Anakin turn around.
The elevator doors open as COUNT DOOKU strides into the
room. He’s on a balcony above the Jedi, with two SUPER
BATTLE DROIDS.
Dooku executes a forward flip down to the main level like
a man half his age.
Obi-Wan and Anakin throw off their cloaks and ignite
their lightsabers.
COUNT DOOKU
The Master and his apprentice. How
little things have changed.
Obi-Wan and Anakin move toward the wily Count.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:01am 
OBI-WAN KENOBI
You won't get away this time, Dooku.
Obi-Wan and Anakin charge Count Dooku. A great sword
fight ensues.
COUNT DOOKU
I've been looking forward to this.
ANAKIN
My powers have doubled since the last
time we met.
COUNT DOOKU
Good. Twice the pride, double the fall.
Dooku lunges at the JEDI and they fall back.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:01am 
COUNT DOOKU
Your moves are clumsy, Kenobi, too
predictable. You'll have to do better.
As the battle proceeds, Obi-Wan and Dooku are tired.
Anakin grows stronger as he becomes angry. He takes the
attack to Dooku. The Count throws Obi-Wan back using the
Force.
Anakin and Dooku move up the stairs. As they reach the
upper landing of the General's Quarters, Anakin leaps
over the Count.
Obi-Wan reaches the top of the stairs, destroying TWO
SUPER BATTLE DROIDS.
Dooku holds Obi-Wan in the air using the Force, turns and
kicks Skywalker out of frame.
Obi-Wan is choking. Anakin hits the archway.
Dooku sends Kenobi flying. The Jedi tumbles to the lower
level unconscious.
Dooku spins around again, and using the Force, collapses
a section of the balcony onto Obi-Wan.
Anakin spins and kicks the Count, sending him over the
balcony. Anakin Jumps, following him down to the main
floor.
They continue their vicious fight.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:01am 
COUNT DOOKU
I sense great fear in you, Skywalker.
You have hate, you have anger, but you
don’t use them.
Anakin regains his composure and attacks Dooku as the
Dark Lord continues his spin to meet him head on.
Anakin attacks Dooku with a new ferocity. Their fighting
becomes even more intense.
Finally, in one last energized charge, Anakin cuts off
both Dooku's hands! The Jedi catches the lightsaber as
it drops from the Sith Lord's severed hand.
Dooku stumbles to the floor in shock as Anakin puts the
two lightsabers to his neck.
Palpatine is grinning as he watches the evil Count's
defeat.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:00am 
PALPATINE
Good, Anakin, good. I knew you could do
it. Kill him. Kill him now!
Dooku is bewildered by the Chancellor’s vicious order.
ANAKIN
I shouldn't...
PALPATINE
(sternly)
Do it!
The helpless Count’s eyes widen, he cannot believe his
legendary life will end like this.
Anakin cuts off Dooku's head. A huge EXPLOSION somewhere
deep in the ship rattles everything.
ANAKIN
I, I couldn't stop myself.
PALPATINE
You did well, Anakin. He was too
dangerous to be kept alive. Believe me,
the galaxy will be a much better place
without him.
Anakin tosses Dooku's lightsaber to the floor.
ANAKIN
Yes, but he was an unarmed prisoner.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:00am 
He raises his hand towards the Admiral's Chair, the
Chancellor's restraints pop loose.
ANAKIN
I shouldn't have done that, Chancellor.
It's not the Jedi way.
Palpatine stands up, rubbing his wrists.
PALPATINE
It is only natural. You wanted revenge.
ANAKIN
No... it wasn’t like that this time.
Palpatine places his hands on Anakin’s shoulders.
PALPATINE
It wasn't the first time, Anakin.
Besides, he was threatening the life of
the Supreme Chancellor of the Republic.
ANAKIN
(beat)
I suppose.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:00am 
PALPATINE
Should there be an inquiry I shall vouch
for your bravery. Now, we really must
leave before more security droids arrive.
The ship begins leaning to one side.
Anakin rushes over to Obi-Wan, lifts the control console
from on top of him, and pulls him free. He kneels down
and checks his unconscious friend.
Palpatine heads for the elevators.
PALPATINE
Anakin, there isn’t any time. We must
get off the ship before it's too late.
ANAKIN
He seems to be all right.
PALPATINE
Leave him, or we'll never make it.
ANAKIN
His fate will be the same as ours.
He picks up Obi-Wan, slings him over his shoulder, heads
for the elevators.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:00am 
INT. BRIDGE - TRADE FEDERATION CRUISER
GENERAL GRIEVOUS
Prepare for attack.
PILOT
All batteries fire! Fire!
INT. BATTLESTATIONS - REPUBLIC CRUISER
Clone gunners fire on the Trade Federation cruiser and
take fire in return. Gun emplacements are destroyed.
Clone troopers go flying.
INT. ELEVATOR LOBBY - TRADE FEDERATION CRUISER
Anakin, Obi-Wan and Palpatine enter an elevator.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:00am 
INT. ELEVATOR
Anakin lays Obi-Wan down, contacts Artoo via comlink.
ANAKIN
Artoo, we’re in the same elevator as
before. Get us back down to the hangar.
PALPATINE
(re: Obi-Wan)
We’re taking an awful risk lugging him
around.
ANAKIN
(firmly; irritated)
The burden is all mine, and I don’t want
to hear to any more talk of it.
The elevator starts moving.
PALPATINE
I apologize, Anakin. I just want this
ordeal to be over with.
ANAKIN
You’ll be back in the Senate in no time.
Obi-Wan snaps back into life.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Where are we?
Anakin helps him to his feet.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 10:00am 
ANAKIN
On our way out of here.
PALPATINE
How good to have you back with us, Master
Kenobi.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
It’s good to be back, Chancellor.
(to Anakin)
And Dooku?
ANAKIN
He’s dead.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Dead? Our plan was to return with him as
our prisoner, Anakin.
ANAKIN
Well, things didn’t go that smoothly. He
wasn’t exactly willing to surrender.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
(upset)
How are we going to explain this to the
Council? Dooku would’ve been a wealth of
information to us.
ANAKIN
He never would have talked, Master.
PALPATINE
Master Kenobi, if I may intervene. I
witnessed the entire event. Lord Tyranus
left Anakin no alternative but to kill or
be killed.
Obi-Wan looks at Anakin.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Is this true, Anakin.
ANAKIN
Yes, Master.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Then the word of the Supreme Chancellor
is good enough for me.
The elevator stops. The door opens.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 9:59am 
INT. HANGAR
The Jedi are now back where they began. Both of their
starfighters still intact.
ANAKIN
Here we are.
The three of them exit the elevator.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
It simply can’t be this easy.
ANAKIN
Try and keep a positive outlook, Master.
(comlink)
Artoo, we’re here.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 9:59am 
Artoo moves out into the open, rolls towards Anakin’s
Starfighter.
Obi-Wan and Palpatine jog towards his ship when...
The main blast door opens, revealing General Grievous and
his two Bodyguards.
GENERAL GRIEVOUS
Leaving so soon, Jedi?
Anakin ignites his lightsaber, moves towards Grievous.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Anakin, wait.
PALPATINE
Is he always this forceful?
OBI-WAN KENOBI
I’m afraid so. Wait here, Chancellor.
Anakin is almost upon Grievous
GENERAL GRIEVOUS
(to his Bogyguards)
Kill him!
The Droid Bodyguards whirl their electro-staffs as they
charge Anakin.
Anakin grins, waits for them to get closer, then flips
over them.
ANAKIN
Master!
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 9:59am 
Obi-Wan is in front of the Bodyguards now.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
I’ve got them!
Obi-Wan fights the two Bodyguards.
Anakin is free to challenge Grievous.
ANAKIN
You’re all mine, General.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 9:59am 
GENERAL GRIEVOUS
(coughing)
Pitiful Jedi!
Grievous ignites two lightsabers and engages Anakin.
They take the fight inside the hangar.
Obi-Wan destroys the Droid Bodyguards within a few moves.
Anakin and Grievous are locked in mortal combat. The
Cyborg General is the weaker of the two, but he’s filled
with tricks.
As Anakin forces him against the wall, Grievous uses his
feet claws and scales the wall.
ANAKIN
Coward!
GENERAL GRIEVOUS
Come and get me, Jedi!
He gets his wish. Anakin uses the Force to toss a crate
at Grievous, knocking him down from the wall.
Grievous lands on top of a Vulture Droid, smashing it to
pieces.
ANAKIN
You keep on running, Grievous...
Grievous scurries away like an insect using his four arms
and two legs.
Anakin catches up to him, cutting off one arm.
Grievous doesn’t want to fight, he’s looking for an
escape.
ANAKIN
There’s nowhere to run. I’m gonna take
the rest of your arms now!
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 9:59am 
Grievous scales the wall again, this time squeezing into
an Exhaust Port, where he disappears.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
He’s gone, Anakin. We’ve got what we
came for, so let’s get out of here.
Anakin is frustrated, wanting so badly to finish off the
droid General.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
This ship is on its last leg. We best be
going.
Obi-Wan climbs into his Starfighter, taking Palpatine
with him. Anakin and Artoo get into their Starfighter.
Both Jedi take off as a random EXPLOSION rattles the big
Cruiser’s hangar.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 9:59am 
INT. EXHAUST PORT - TRADE FEDERATION CRUISER
General Grievous scurries down the tiny shaft, coughing
all the way.
INT. POD BAY
Grievous enters the escape pod bay through the hatch. He
goes to a control panel and opens an escape pod. The
Droid General pulls a row of switches, and one by one the
remaining pods are jettisoned.
INT. ESCAPE POD - SPACE
He climbs inside one, the hatch closes, and the escape
pod blasts away from the damaged Cruiser.
EXT. SPACE
Anakin and Obi-Wan’s Starfighters speed out of the
severely damaged Trade Federation Cruiser in the nick of
time.
Numerous EXPLOSIONS rock the heavy Cruiser, causing it to
nosedive towards the planet surface.
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 9:58am 
INT. OBI-WAN’S STARFIGHTER
Obi-Wan steers clear of incoming Droid fighters,
Palpatine sees the sinking Cruiser.
PALPATINE
Oh my, that’s a disater in the making.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
The Chancellor’s right, Anakin. If
Grievous’s ship hits the surface...
NIOWL 22 Apr, 2023 @ 9:58am 
ANAKIN
(finishing)
Massive casualties, I know.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Any suggestions?
ANAKIN
Finish it off up here.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
That requires too much firepower.
Besides half the fleet would have to
chase it down.
ANAKIN
Right.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Well, we have to do something.
PALPATINE
You’re Jedi. Why don’t you use the
Force?
Obi-Wan thinks a moment, makes perfect sense.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Anakin?
ANAKIN
Seems reasonable... I think.
OBI-WAN KENOBI
Squad Seven can mop up here. We can beat
the ship to the surface.
ANAKIN
I’m following your lead, Master.