1. Screenshots (it's not the first game on Steam). "Prt Sc"-key doesn't take on fullscreen the game eighter 2. Maybe this: http://imgur.com/a/t9bs6

How long is the game if one reads it? Average reader speed.

Do I need to redownload or something, because I can't save the game. Neither pressing escape nor right clicking seems to do anything.

don't use "they" and "them" to refer to a single person. that makes no sense and you have no idea how distracting that is from the story, and also confusing. immersion isn't possible when you can't use basic grammar right. I know you want to leave the person's sex unnamed, but there are better ways to convey that. e.g. use "the person", or just he. but not group pronouns. is this a translation? unless the traveller is really actually comprised of two entities for some reason, in that case it makes perfect...

It seems she gives an extra dialog for this name, and yet there's no achievements for it. Is there a reason for it?